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"Come to me," she whispered, offering a pale hand.
Something in her voice and eyes, forces me to stand.
A single burning purpose, in a mind that was a wreck.
She pulls me closer, tilts my head, granting access to my neck.
"You'll live in me forever," she purrs into my ear.
Deep inside I know what's next, and yet I feel no fear.
Her cherry lips brush my skin, sending shivers down my spine.
Her hand reaches around my back, and air is hard to find.
Soft breath upon my jawline, she moves in for the kill,
She sucks me dry, and as I die, I'm living for the thrill.
©2006-2009 ~JohnnyUwibami
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poem - Essentially a part 1

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omg

Friend says: candy... verry lovely

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*TUG TUG* ... ah yes the good old days...
:icondreamblade:
Love the series.

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:iconjohnnyuwibami:
Thank you. I hope to continue it.

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I've spent 99% of my money on wine, women and song. The rest I wasted.
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I absolutely love it. Your poem is much deeper than mine. I felt as though I was there. :)
:iconjohnnyuwibami:
Thanks, though I really did enjoys yours too. 'Vampiric Mistress' is part of an ongoing series.

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I've spent 99% of my money on wine, women and song. The rest I wasted.
:icondreamindemon:
this is so beautiful.

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:iconjohnnyuwibami:
Thank you. I appreciate the compliment.

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I've spent 99% of my money on wine, women and song. The rest I wasted.
:icondreamindemon:
welcome ^_^

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Who loves Ville Valo? Wendie does! Who loves Gerard Way? Katie and I do! Who loves Pete wentz and DJ? Emily does! Who loves me? Wendie Daigneault.(at least that’s what she thinks)
GlOw In ThE dArK dInAsOuR! AHhHhH!
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imy like :)

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