Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 

Blocks on a shelf by ~JohnnyUwibami:iconJohnnyUwibami:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Fixed


An empty page
fills me with rage
so I grab my pen

words combine
line after line
as I fill the pages in

with will diminished
some go unfinished
and I place them on a shelf

There may come a time
to finish the rhyme
when, is only known to myself
©2007-2009 ~JohnnyUwibami
:iconjohnnyuwibami:

Author's Comments

Looking back at some unfinished pieces

Comments


love 0 0 joy 1 1 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconhindered-mind:
Mood: Joy ~Hindered-mind Jun 28, 2007, 1:34:57 PM
Love this one!

Nicely done

--
Life is easy; it's dying that's hard.
:iconjohnnyuwibami:
~JohnnyUwibami Jun 28, 2007, 1:44:50 PM
Thank you. Now if I could only finish some of those poems......

--
I've spent 99% of my money on wine, women and song. The rest I wasted.
:iconhindered-mind:
~Hindered-mind Jun 28, 2007, 1:49:20 PM
Its always better to come back to them later when you have new ideas

--
Life is easy; it's dying that's hard.
:iconhallowx:
~HallowX Jun 28, 2007, 4:24:27 PM
What writer doesn't have this problem?
Yes, it's always better to let them be for a long while until you find yourself out of fresh material.

--
Have you ever wished for thunder so your screams won't seem alone?...
:iconlorananirren:
~lorananirren Jul 23, 2007, 10:14:42 PM
heehee! Oh have I felt this soooooooo many times! and yet, more often than not...I leave things unfinished...*shrug* I feel this more when I get the urge to write but can't think of a thing to write about, it's very frustrating.

--
The void breathed hard on my heart, turning its illusions to ice, shattering them. --Rorschach, Watchmen
:iconjohnnyuwibami:
~JohnnyUwibami Jul 24, 2007, 4:58:36 AM
I'm the opposite. The ideas are there, but I have to force myself to sit down and write. Glad to see you back..:)

--
Save the whales. We'll eat em last.
:iconlorananirren:
~lorananirren Jul 24, 2007, 11:12:42 AM
Thanks, it's good to be back in some ways, sad in others.

--
The void breathed hard on my heart, turning its illusions to ice, shattering them. --Rorschach, Watchmen
:iconoperakitten:
~operakitten Sep 7, 2007, 6:54:43 PM
I feel this way about my sketchbook, sometimes. :) Your poetry is just so natural. I'm not a big poetry buff, so I don't really know much about it, but I like it!
:iconjohnnyuwibami:
~JohnnyUwibami Sep 7, 2007, 7:30:42 PM
You may claim to not be a poetry buff, but I appreciate your comments just the same. I imagine that all types of creative forces experience a block in some form or another, eventually.

--
Save the whales. We'll eat em last.
Previous PageNext Page

Details

June 28, 2007
429 bytes

Statistics

9
2 [who?]
38 (0 today)
0 (0 today)

Site Map

©2009 deviantART. All rights reserved
About Us | Contact Us | Site Tour | Help & FAQ Advertise | Services Etiquette | Privacy Policy | Terms of Service | Copyright Policy